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Chapter 1: Dawn Rises in Baruoki

16 years ago the Mayor of Baruoki found Aldo and Feinne in the Moonlight Forest. The Mayor raised them as his own children. Those peaceful days may soon be coming to an end...

17 scenes, 187 lines

1. Scene 1

27 lines
Beast

Wretched humans! Thinking they can do as they please! No entry for us beastfolk, huh? How dare they! This forest used to belong to us...

What's that sound?

???

Waaah!

Beast

A human baby? What is it doing here?

Even humans can be cute as innocent little babies... What's wrong? Are you sad, little one? Lost your mother?

Hey, little one... Peek-a-boo!

Baby

Waaah! Waaah!

Beast

Well, that didn't work...

Huh? This power...this strange power, lying dormant in this child... Could it be?!

Oh, someone's coming. The last thing I want is to have to deal with people...

I have to leave you now, little one. Maybe we will meet again one day.

Baby

Waaah!

Waaah! Waaah!

Mayor

Oh my! I thought I heard crying. Lo and behold, a baby in the midst of a forest! What is going on here, laddie? Where is your home? Is this your baby sister?

Boy

......

Baby

Waaah! Waaah!

Mayor

Oh dear... Do not be afraid, child. Hush, no more crying. Be a good girl, sweetie.

Baby

Waaah! Waaah!

Feinne

Wakey wakey, big bro! Aldo... Wake up, Aldo!

Aldo

Ngh... Wha...?

Feinne

C'mon, Aldo, it's morning! Get up already!

Aldo

*yawn* I guess you're right. Mornin', Feinne.

Feinne

Don't "mornin'" me. Do you have any idea what time it is? The sun's already risen above the Pekari Trees. At this rate you're gonna be late for your meeting with Darunis.

Aldo

Oh no, I forgot about that! I'd better get going.

Feinne

Hurry up!

No going back to sleep, okay?

Aldo

All set. Time for another day of protecting the peace!

2. Scene 2

6 lines
Aldo

Feinne, Grandpa, I'm heading out!

Feinne

See you later, Aldo. Take care of yourself!

Aldo

Hey, Darunis! Sorry I'm late, I overslept a little.

Darunis

I had a feeling you might. You've never really been a morning person. It doesn't surprise me anymore.

Aldo

Sounds good. I'll head over right away.

Darunis

Keep up the good work, Aldo.

3. Scene 3

4 lines
Ashtear

Listen up, Aldo. Prisma are crystallizations of the four basic elements - fire, water, earth, and wind. We still don't know all the details, but our leading theory is that they're formed deep within the earth over long periods of time. They're the cornerstone of all human civilization. I'm serious - we'd still be living in caves if we hadn't learned to harness these! So show a little respect when you handle prisma. Touch them gently, with a heart full of gratitude. That's not so hard, right?

Kiiindly... Soooftly...

Aldo

Whatever you say, Ashtear. (It's totally not worth arguing with her...)

Ashtear

Good! Compared to the vastness of nature, we humans are no more than grains of sand. Remember that. Forgetting our place in the world will only bring disaster. Give it a try - see this Wind Prisma here? Allow its gentle breeze to soothe your body and mind.

4. Scene 4

11 lines
Feinne

Aldo, there you are!

Aldo

Hiya, Feinne. Something wrong?

Feinne

Ta-da! I have a job for you. Grandpa wants you to activate all the Water Prisma in the village. The weather's been so dry, we could be looking at a drought if we don't do something. Think of the poor plants! Healthy flowers means a village full of happy people, right?

Aldo

I guess so. Okay, I'll get right on it.

I don't see what's so cool about it, but sure, if you want.

Feinne

Woo hoo! Give it your best shot!

Aldo

Don't forget, there's a trick to activating prisma. Kiiindly... Soooftly...

Feinne

Huh? What are you talking about?

Aldo

Oh, nothing. C'mon, let's go.

Feinne

Right behind you!

Feinne joined your party!

5. Scene 5

10 lines

Activate the Water Prisma?

Feinne

Yay, that's the last one! Now the plants and flowers can grow nice and strong. Nice work out there, Aldo. Here, Grandpa said I should give you this when you finished.

One more thing... I was wondering if I could talk to you about something.

Aldo

Geez, is that what this was all about?

Feinne

I thought it'd be nice to give Grandpa a new cane. Kind of as a thank-you present from both of us.

Aldo

Sounds like a good idea. That old stick he's using right now is practically falling apart.

Feinne

Right? So, I think we should make it from a Coconerica branch. They're real sturdy, and the pattern's pretty, too.

Aldo

Coconerica, huh? Okay, let's go find us the perfect branch for the job.

Feinne

Yeah! There should be plenty of them out on the Nuaru Uplands. Once we have one, we can ask the blacksmith to carve it into the right shape.

Aldo

Wow, you've put a lot of thought into this. To the uplands!

6. Scene 6

4 lines

You got a Coconerica Branch!

Feinne

Yay! This is exactly what we need.

Aldo

Next up is the blacksmith, right? He should be able to work with this. Want to head back right now?

Feinne

Let's go!

7. Scene 7

20 lines
Blacksmith

Aldo, Feinne, hey there! What can I do for you kids? You know we're closed today, right?

Feinne

Sorry to bother you, Sir, but we'd really like to have this Coconerica branch made into a cane.

Blacksmith

A cane? You're a little too young for one of those, aren't ya? Oh, I get it. It's a present for the Mayor, right?

Aldo

Yeah. It was 16 years ago today the Mayor found Feinne and I out in the forest and took us in.

Feinne

We wanted to give him something to say thank you for taking care of us all this time. I know it's your day off, but do you think you could make an exception?

Blacksmith

Ha, guess there's no rest for the wicked. If that's all you want, it won't take me long. Let's take a look at what you've got.

Yup, this is Coconerica, all right. Looks like a fine, sturdy piece, too. That'll make shaping it a little tricky... But don't you worry your little heads! I'm the finest smith for miles around. No job is too hard for me.

Feinne

Wow, thank you!

Aldo

It's real nice of you to do this for us. Thanks so much.

Blacksmith

No problem. I owe the Mayor plenty myself, I'm glad to be able to do him a good turn. Now, about the design... Wouldn't it be cool if you had something flashy on the top? A lil' bit of glitz and glam?

Aldo

Glitz? For a walking stick?

Blacksmith

Just imagine it, a proud cane topped with a glittering gemstone! Doesn't that just scream "Mayor" to you?

Aldo

It screams something, but...

Feinne

That sounds wonderful! I want his present to be as beautiful as possible!

Blacksmith

Sounds like we're on the same page. You might want to check out the dried-up well on the edge of the village. Not many folks know this, but there's a hole in the wall that leads to a cave. Might be worth digging around in there. Just don't go telling everyone you meet about it, okay? I've found some good minerals there, and I'd like to keep it secret.

Feinne

Our lips are sealed. The back of the cave under the dry well, right? I can't wait to see it!

Shake a leg, Aldo! Let's show Grandpa just how much he means to us!

Aldo

I'm all for expressing our gratitude, but... Do we really need to make it so showy?

Feinne

Don't be such a party-pooper. We'll be right back, Mister Blacksmith, sir!

Blacksmith

I'll get started on shaping the cane while you're gone. Take care of yourselves, kids.

8. Scene 8

4 lines

The bricks in this wall look loose. Strike the wall?

Feinne

Wow... There really was a secret entrance here.

Aldo

This is starting to get creepy. Are you sure you want to go in here?

Feinne

Of course! Where's your sense of adventure? But...I do think you should go first.

9. Scene 9

2 lines

You got Migradrite!

Feinne

This is so cool, we dug up a real treasure! Come on, let's go see what the blacksmith can do with this.

10. Scene 10

10 lines
Blacksmith

Nice timing. I just finished up here. Hand over the stones and I'll get to work on the modifications.

Feinne

Here you go!

Blacksmith

Oh, you got your hands on some high-quality Migradrite there. I'll have this done in a jiffy!

There! One Coconerica cane, custom-made for our beloved Mayor. It's got a real keen edge to it.

Feinne

A-An edge?

Blacksmith

Oh, excuse me, I was just rambling. It's nothing you need to worry about. The Mayor'll be delighted with this. Treat it careful, now.

You got the Custom-Made Cane!

Feinne

Thank you so much. Wow, this is absolutely beautiful!

Aldo

Yeah, thanks a bunch! We owe you one.

Blacksmith

Anything for the Mayor. I wouldn't be surprised if he wept tears of joy over this. Ha!

11. Scene 11

9 lines
Boy

Hey, Aldo! Did ya hear? Varuo and his pal Langelo are really going at it! They're on the hill over at the edge of the village.

Aldo

Again? Urgh, he's got such a short fuse... I'd better go take a look. Thanks for letting me know. Be careful when you go outside the village, okay?

Boy

You too, Aldo. I know you're a guard and all, but don't get hurt out there!

Feinne

I can't believe Varuo! I bet he and Langelo are fighting over a girl again.

Aldo

I guess we should go see if we can calm them down.

Feinne

Hold on, Aldo. I need to go home and get dinner ready for tonight. Find Varuo and bring him back with you, all right?

Aldo

Sure thing. I'll see you later.

Feinne

See you!

Feinne left your party.

12. Scene 12

2 lines
Aldo

There you are. Where is Langelo? Have you finished your little scrap? Maybe he has something against calicos. Hey, buddy, you hungry? Feinne said dinner'll be...

Huh? Urgh, Varuo... Where'd he go now?

13. Scene 13

33 lines
Man

I-It hurts! Please... L-Let me go!

Vares

Tell us what we want to know. Then your pain will be at an end, I promise.

Beast King

A baby was found in the forest 16 years ago. Where is she now?

Aldo? I've no business with him. Where can I find this "Feinne"?

Man

The...the Mayor's house... Both of them should be there... Now let me go!

Arrrgh!

Vares

See, no more pain.

Beast King

Come, Vares.

Vares

Yessir!

Feinne

Dinner's almost ready, Grandpa. I'll serve it up as soon as Aldo and Varuo get back. I pulled out all the stops for this meal. I just know you're gonna love it! Plus, when you're done eating, I have a little surprise for you... Hee hee!

Mayor

Hrm...?

Oh, right... Sounds great, Feinne. I'm looking forward to it.

Feinne

Is something wrong, Grandpa? You seem a little distracted.

Mayor

It's nothing, really... I received a letter from the capital some time back. People are starting to worry about the beastfolk. Word has it their forces have united under a new leader, an individual they're calling the Beast King.

Feinne

You'll give yourself wrinkles if you worry over silly rumors. Everything will be fine, you'll see.

Mayor

Hmm... I can only hope you're right, Feinne.

Beast King

I hate to shatter your self-deception, but our forces are already on the move.

Feinne

Ahh!

Mayor

Beastfolk?! What are you doing here?

Beast King

It seems my name has already spread as far as tiny villages like this one.

Mayor

What? You're...the Beast King?!

Well, "Your Majesty," what do you mean by barging into my home like this?

Beast King

Don't flatter yourself, old-timer. I'm here for the girl.

Feinne

Huh? Me?!

Mayor

What do you want with Feinne? Now see here, mister, I don't know what...

Beast King

You're beginning to bore me. Vares, if you will.

Vares

Yessir!

Feinne

Nooo!

Mayor

Stop... Get away, you fiends!

Feinne

Ahhhh!

Aldo

The Gallery of Dreams, huh? Good name for such a weird place. Sure did feel like something out of a dream. Almost like I'd strayed into a completely different world...

C'mon, Varuo, time to head home. Today's a special day, you know? Hard to believe it's been 16 years already. Feinne said she's cooking up an extra special meal to celebrate!

Varuo

Mrow!

14. Scene 14

9 lines
Aldo

Wh-What the... Grandpa?!

Gramps, are you okay? What happened here? Where's Feinne?!

Mayor

A-Aldo... The beastfolk... They took Feinne... I'm sorry... They were too strong for me...

Aldo

What?! Why would they do that?

Mayor

I don't know... Hurry, laddie... They can't have gone far. You may yet be able to save her!

Aldo

What about you? I can't just leave you alone like this...

Mayor

It's not as bad as it looks. I'll be fine once I get a little rest... Please, Aldo!

Aldo

All right. I'll go after the beasts. I'll bring Feinne back!

Mayor

Be careful, my boy...

15. Scene 15

14 lines
Aldo

Huh? Why are there beastfolk here? Feinne?! Hey, what the heck do you think you're doing?

Beast King

And who might you be?

Aldo

I'm that girl's brother, you creep! Feinne, are you okay?

Beast King

Ah yes. Aldo, wasn't it? Sorry, boy, I'll be borrowing your sister for a while. I have need of her power. It's the only thing that can eliminate the scourge that is humanity from this world.

Aldo

Are you out of your mind? There's no way Feinne has power like that!

Beast King

I don't have time to stand and chat. The truth of the situation would be wasted on vermin like you.

Aldo

We'll see about that!

Beast King

Resorting to violence already? Do you value your life so little, boy?

Vares

Your Majesty, allow me to deal with this whelp.

Beast King

Stand down, Vares. I need you to keep an eye on the girl.

Vares

As you wish, Sire.

Beast King

As for you. It's about time you humans learned what true suffering is.

Step forward, boy. I hope you have something to back up all that aggression.

Aldo

There's no way I'll let you take Feinne away!

16. Scene 16

14 lines
Aldo

Stop right there!

Beast King

And who might you be?

Aldo

I'm that girl's brother, you creep! Feinne, are you okay?

Beast King

Ah yes. Aldo, wasn't it? Sorry, boy, I'll be borrowing your sister for a while. I have need of her power. It's the only thing that can eliminate the scourge that is humanity from this world.

Aldo

Are you out of your mind? There's no way Feinne has power like that!

Beast King

I don't have time to stand and chat. The truth of the situation would be wasted on vermin like you.

Aldo

We'll see about that!

Beast King

Resorting to violence already? Do you value your life so little, boy?

Vares

Your Majesty, allow me to deal with this whelp.

Beast King

Stand down, Vares. I need you to keep an eye on the girl.

Vares

As you wish, sire.

Beast King

As for you. It's about time you humans learned what true suffering is.

Step forward, boy. I hope you have something to back up all that aggression.

Aldo

There's no way I'll let you take Feinne away!

17. Scene 17

8 lines
Young Lady

Aldo! Aldo! Please, open your eyes... Aldo, are you okay?

Aldo

Urgh...

It's back to normal...

No good, huh? What happened to all that power it had earlier? And what was that voice? No, weird voices coming out of swords can wait. Right now I've got to focus on saving Feinne!

Young Lady

The beastfolk were heading toward Moonlight Forest... Are you sure you're all right, Aldo?

Aldo

They kidnapped my sister... I can't afford to sit around and wait!

Young Lady

Please, just be careful!

Aldo

Don't worry. I'll be back.