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A Pure Prayer

In order to save the people who have lost their sense of pain, the travelers from another world board a freighter...

10 scenes, 292 lines

1. Scene 1

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Colette

It's feels so weird to be walking above the clouds.

Lloyd

Yeah, it feels different than flying on a rheaird, somehow.

There's nothing around for miles... Air nice and crisp...

Alphen

Just looking out into the horizon feels exhilarating. This is amazing.

Shionne

On top of the fact that we might be on our way to fight the enemy, you mean.

Lloyd

Sure, but you can't blame us for taking a moment to take it all in.

It's important to get your bearings, you know?

Genis

Or you were just getting bored.

Lloyd

So what if I was!

Alphen

I gotta say, I'm a little jealous. You're all so candid with each other.

Hope someday we can be like that...

Shionne

......

Rinwell

......

Alphen

It's probably going to be a bit, though. Heh.

Aldo

So which freighter takes us to the industrial plate?

Amy

They usually arrive right around here. It's non-stop so it shouldn't take long to get there.

2. Scene 2

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Alphen

Hey Aldo, this looks like a good place to setup camp. How about we catch a break before we check out the lab?

Aldo

Don't you think we better hurry?

Alphen

I always find that if you're going into unknown territory, it's better to rest up first. You never know what might be waiting for you once you get there, you know?

Aldo

You're pretty good handling situations like this, huh. Never lose your cool, never run head-first...

Alphen

Ah, well you can thank a certain someone for that.

3. Scene 3

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Aldo

So this is Fraxinus Labs, eh? How long has this place been abandoned?

Amy

The news about them going under wasn't that long ago, so less than a year.

Genis

I mean, I'm no plant expert, but this doesn't look like a place that's only been abandoned a few months.

Cyrus

When man is absent, nature takes its course, does it not?

Amy

It would be if it wasn't for the fact all plant-life is synthetic in this era.

They've all been made so they grow the perfect amount all on their own. The exact opposite of...well... all this.

Dohalim

Then perhaps someone did something to make it grow out of control?

Amy

Yeah, I mean, I guess that's possible.

Aldo

Well, at any rate, we should go in and have a look. It might just be a problem on the outside.

Visitors detected. Please state your business.

Amy

Well it looks like the security is still working, at least.

Aldo

We're here to check out the research facility.

Bio-data registration is required in order to enter the Fraxinus Labs research center. If you agree to register your bio-data answer "Accept" if you decline, please answer by saying "Decline."

Genis

Just keep saying accept till they let us in.

Colette

Reminds me of when we went to Elzion for the first time.

Aldo

Everyone okay with saying yes? Not like we have much of a choice.

Amy

We accept. Now allow us entry into the research center.

...Beginning bio-data scan...

...Bio-Data scan complete. Thank you for your cooperation.

Rinwell

It's not like they did anything to us, but the thought of having my body scanned kinda grosses me out.

Amy

Sorry, Rinwell.

Rinwell

You don't have to apologize, Amy. You didn't do anything wrong!

Aldo

All right guys, let's go in.

Lloyd

Well it's not as bad as it is on the outside, but it's still a bit overrun with roots, eh.

Rinwell

Yes, and if you look at this cross section, it shows this growth happened rather recently.

Colette

......

Rinwell

What's wrong, Colette?

Colette

It's just...does anyone else hear that noise? Sounds like some kind of machine...

Shionne

I don't hear anything.

Lloyd

Colette's got these really sensitive ears. She can hear things normal people can't.

Amy

Could be that the security systems are still online.

Aldo

Whatever it is, let's tread carefully.

4. Scene 4

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Aldo

Why is this room so much cleaner than the others?

Amy

Wonder if someone is still using it?

Dohalim

Maybe? We should look around to see if we can find any info that might be helpful.

Genis

Researchers tend to take extremely detailed notes. I know my sis does.

Rinwell

Well then, where should we start?

Zelos

I'm gonna guess over....there!

Lloyd

Oh...yeah that's a lot of letters I can't read. Ummm...help?

Alphen

They look like the letters we found on those drones.

Amy

It's a dated list of research notes.

Zelos

And look who found 'em? Feel free to call me your lucky charm, I won't let it get to my head, I promise.

Aldo

Great work, Zelos!

Zelos

I was talking to the...

Aldo

You really are our lucky charm.

Zelos

Eh, I guess.

Cyrus

There's so many of them... Where do we even start?

Aldo

Hmm...

Says here this "White Tree" file was last edited by someone named Fluge. That's our guy, right?

Amy

Let's open it and see what it says.

XX/XX/XXXX Finding the Rift Curious as to what was on the other side, I went in. What I found was a place where time stood still. And in this space there was a giant tree, and a life form that resembled a human girl. It was asleep, holding the dried remains of a dead something.

When it discovered I was injured it used its power to try and take the pain away. And it worked. But, with it I also started to lose my sense of self.

And I would have lost it all, if it weren't for a flower petal.

Aldo

This is...

Cyrus

Fluge's research, it would seem.

Amy

Sounds like he's talking about our girl, here.

Aldo

Saved by a flower petal? What does that mean?

YY/YY/YYYY Life Form Research Results I found that the life form is what is called a "spirit." An ancient civilization built a temple to it and worshiped it for its healing powers. They called it, "The great healing tree." I am proof that this was not just some ancient superstition. The power was real, but not the way they knew. It doesn't "heal" anything. It feeds on life energy to the point you become numb to pain. This spirit believes it serves humanity. But its kindness could very well destroy us all.

Lloyd

She didn't know what her power was doing to people...

Colette

All she wanted was to help, but all it did was hurt...I feel so sorry for her...

ZZ/ZZ/ZZZZ Using the rift to travel back to antiquity. There was something I needed to confirm. On the walls of the temple, I found some writing that said the following: "Heed the scent of the Great Healing Tree Asclepia. For it is as sweet as it is dangerous." "But fear not the flower's petal. for it heals all." If what it says is true, then the petal I found when I first entered the rift must be it. The key to my life's work, after years of toil, fallen right at my feet. It was also said the life force it feeds on causes these flowers to bloom. And now I know what I must do...

Shionne

So he decided to sacrifice others for his own personal gain.

Alphen

Did he seriously think people would let that slide?

???

Didn't your mother ever tell you it was rude to go through someone's personal things?

Aldo

Dr. Fluge, I presume?

Fluge

Indeed. And you are in my lab.

Aldo

Is all this stuff you wrote true?

Fluge

So you read my research without permission, and this is what you ask me? You think I'd falsify my own data?

Alphen

Okay, well how about this, then.

Fluge

Go ahead.

Alphen

Is there any way to put people back the way they were?

Fluge

I suppose you could give them their life force back. But the problem is, for those I've already used, there is nothing to give back.

I suppose you could kill the people I gave them to and take it back that way. How does that sound?

Lloyd

The hell is wrong with you?!

Fluge

We are merely taking something that would have otherwise gone to waste. These people wish for death, and all we are doing is making sure their life is valued.

A human that does nothing but wish for death clearly does not appreciate life. I do. I give their life value!

They should be thanking me!

Lloyd

Value? The hell does that mean? What do you think life is?

Fluge

A tool. That's how our society works, does it not? Me, me, me. All that matters is "me." If you're not someone I can use, then who cares what happens to you, right?

I'm just doing what THEY did to ME! I will no longer suffer ridicule from the unwashed masses. I will NOT be denied. Not from them, and sure as hell not from YOU.

Now. Since you so brazenly read my research, allow me to present to you my conclusion!

5. Scene 5

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Fluge

Now. Since you so brazenly read my research, allow me to present to you my conclusion!

6. Scene 6

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7. Scene 7

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Aldo

Damn! Not even as much as a scratch!

Fluge

That would be thanks to the special alloy that forms its outer shell.

Your silly swords, guns, and what have you are useless.

Alphen

I'm gonna need some extra healing for this Shionne, okay?

Shionne

...Just don't go too crazy. I need you alive.

Alphen

All right.

Aldo

Alphen! Your hands are on fire!

Alphen

My sword ignites when I take it out of the sheath. Sorry, probably should have mentioned that.

Aldo

Sorry?! Alphen! Drop the sword before you burn your hands to a crisp!

Alphen

After I'm done with this hunk of junk.

TAKE THIS!

Fluge

Are you...mad? These are made to withstand huge explosions, you know!

HngH! AAAAHHH!

Shionne

Show me your hands.

Alphen

Thanks Shionne, I appreciate it.

Fluge

My hands...they're...they're on fire! Help me...please...

Pale Girl

As you wish...

Fluge

No...not you...

Pale Girl

Pain is the killer of joy...

Fluge

NO! STOP! YOU CAN'T DO THIS TO ME! DON'T MAKE ME LIKE...

Pale Girl

Fret not my child, all your worries will soon be gone...

Aldo

What is this?!

Lloyd

This is the smell that made us see all those illusions! Try not to breathe it in!

Pale Girl

Thank you...for saving me... To repay your kindness, I will save you as well...

Lloyd

Colette!

You okay?

Colette

Thank you, Lloyd.

Aldo

There's no end to this stuff!

Genis

Hey Rinwell, help me burn these roots!

Rinwell

O-Okay...

Dohalim

I don't think it would be wise to fight here. The girl controls these roots, yes? Then it would be safe to assume that attempting to fight her surrounded by them would be folly.

Aldo

But what do you suggest we do?

Pale Girl

I...know you...

......

Pale Girl

No... I don't... Why would I know a cat...

I'm getting you guys out of here! Come over to me, I'll teleport you!

Lloyd

You're coming with us!

Aldo

Waaagh!

We're...outside?

Sorry, I didn't have enough time to teleport you anywhere else.

Alphen

No, it's totally fine. Thank you for saving us. You're the cat that called me here, aren't you? Why?

Lloyd

To save the girl we just ran away from. Went to a bunch of different worlds looking for help, and I guess we're the only ones that answered the call.

And hey, looks like you're feeling better?

Yes, but not by much.

Aldo

We read something that said she's a spirit. But why would a spirit do all this?

She was corrupted by pain. She was once a spirit of the great tree, worshiped by man. Then, one day a cat wandered into the temple and opened a rift to which they both fell into. She survived, the cat did not. There she remained trapped, all alone.

Aldo

And the cat in this story... It was you?

...... I died and left my master all alone. And yet I now reside in the core of the great tree. And was given the gift that is this form...

Aldo

So you're saying you never...

He tricked her into believing she was saving people.

Fluge

I have finally completed my research... After all these years... I can finally end man's suffering...

Aldo

What's he talking about?

Alphen

I doubt he even knows. He's become just like the believers whose lives he stole.

Shionne

What comes around, goes around.

Aldo

She must have sent the scent right to his brain...

Fluge

Yes...I fin...ally...save..d... you...a...ll...

......

Colette

Is there a way to bring him back, you think?

I don't know... The pain my master speaks of is the life force in all living things... If you lose enough, I don't think there's any coming back...

Colette

How awful...

But all this life force is being gathered in the great tree. Perhaps if we could find a way to release it...

Lloyd

Then we could save him, and all the others, too.

Shionne

And let him do this all over again?

Lloyd

I don't like it either. What he's done is unforgivable.

But everyone has a right to live. And if we have the power to give life back, then we have to do it.

Colette

She wants to help people who are suffering, right? Then I can't imagine she'd be okay with everyone ending up like this.

Yes, that is all she wants. She wants to save everyone. All this stuff about life force is just a side effect...

Alphen

Wait, save everyone? So then it's possible she's about to turn every living thing into a mindless husk?

That is very likely... The artifact that was once used to surpress her power was broken...

Aldo

Artifact?

You understand the effects her scent has on people, yes?

Aldo

Yeah. If you smell too much of it, you become the living dead.

The artifact was created to control it. To keep it from getting too strong... So they made a necklace she could wear. Gave it to her as tribute. The scientist knew this and used it to his advantage.

Shionne

So the only reason those people ended up like that was cause he broke the necklace?

Yes. She has no way to control herself.

Aldo

Well, without it there's no way we're getting close enough to stop her.

Is there any way we can get a new one?

Hmmm... It's hard to say...

Lloyd

Why don't we just fix the old one?

I mean, we know where it is, right?

Alphen

Makes sense he would have had it on him.

Shionne

That thing is shattered to bits, and the stone has a huge chip in it. You really think we can fix it?

Lloyd

I mean, I'd have to take a closer look at it, but if it's anything like the key crest. Yeah, I can do it.

Colette

You were always good at arts and crafts, Lloyd!

Lloyd

You can thank my dad for that. He taught me everything I know.

Shionne

So, we can make the necklace itself, but what do we do about the stone?

Alphen

Is there something special about it?

It's said to have the power to keep balance in the mind and body... I remember the priests at the temple wearing them to keep themselves from succumbing to her scent... It's called "Nadramite", I believe.

Aldo

Hmm... Like the Nadara Volcano? If so, then we can mine it. Let's head back to Ratle and ask around. Someone might be able to point us in the right direction.

Sorry...

Lloyd

About what?

You all have things you need to do in your own worlds, and I took you from that...

Lloyd

That's it? It's fine. We all gotta help each other out, right? If I didn't wanna be here I wouldn't have come. We wanna save her just as much as you do.

...Thank you.

Aldo

......

All right, let's head to Ratle.

I don't want to scare the people of Ratle, so I will hide my form for now.

8. Scene 8

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Lady

You heard the rumors?

Man

You mean what happened to the hunters that came back from the Zol Plains? Said something about this weird smell and then seeing all sorts of weird stuff, right?

Lady

Yeah. Isn't that scary? I know I'm not going any where near there.

Zelos

Seems like everyone's talking about the same thing, huh.

Colette

Sounds like the scent has started leaking out of the temple.

Shionne

Then it's only a matter of time before it gets strong enough to start affecting everyone.

Colette

......

Amy

What'd they say?

Aldo

Said they don't have any. But, Dohalim was able to get the guy to agree to let us use his forge if we find one.

Cyrus

A blacksmith does not simply lend their forge to anyone! How did he get him to do that?!

Dohalim

Nothing special. I just complimented him on his skill as a blacksmith. I went at length about all the precious little details that make his wares special. That's all.

Lloyd

He was so taken aback by it he let us borrow the forge.

Amy

My dad does the same thing. Say one thing about his work and he just lights up. But, I guess this means all we need now is the stone.

Aldo

He said you could find 'em in the middle of the Vasu Mountains.

Said they look like any other ore...

Except, they glow bright in the presence of strong magic.

Dohalim

So if you go, go with a powerful sorcerer.

Rinwell

A sorcerer...

Genis

Well it's a good thing you've got me and Rinwell around then, huh?

Rinwell

Yes! Um... Right! Absolutely right, Genis.

Genis

So just lead us to these Vasu Mountains. We'll take care of the rest!

9. Scene 9

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Aldo

So this should be about the place...

Lloyd

Wow, forget not knowing what the ore looks like, there's so many here I wouldn't know where to start!

I can feel my interest waning in real time...

Rinwell

But we just got here?

Genis

What Rinwell said!

Lloyd

But, like, look at all this stuff...

Genis

No excuses! I swear Lloyd, it's no wonder your grades are so bad.

Aldo

Well hey, the guy back in Ratle said it reacted to magic, right? Genis, Rinwell, mind giving us a hand?

Genis

That's why we're here! Rinwell, you ready?

Rinwell

Okay... If you think it would be helpful...

Dance in the wind.

Genis

Air thrust...

Both

Tear asunder!

Cyrus

So young and yet you wield such amazing power. It is clear you take your studies quite seriously!

Lloyd

Hey! I think we found one!

Aldo

Looks like a little magic was all we needed, eh?

Thanks guys, we really couldn't have done this without you.

Genis

It's official Rinwell, we rock.

Rinwell

I'm glad we were able to find what we were looking for.

Aldo

Now all that's left is for Lloyd to put it all together.

Genis

Just as long as he can get it ready in time, right Lloyd?

Lloyd

Oh, come on! I've got this. Just get me to the forge.

Genis

Okay just don't get bored before we get there.

Rinwell

Yes, we better hurry back to Ratle before Lloyd finds something else to be passionate about!

10. Scene 10

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Owner

You're back!

Aldo

So, did we get the right thing?

Owner

Yup, this is nadramite, all right. Surprised you were able to find it.

Lloyd

It was all thanks to two of the best magic users in all the worlds.

Genis

Flattery doesn't work on me, you know that right?

Rinwell

I didn't really do all that much...

Hootle

Hooo! Hoooo!

Lloyd

See, even Hootle thinks you're awesome!

Rinwell

Well...thanks...

Lloyd

Okay, I'm gonna need a few hours to get this thing into shape. You guys go get some rest.

Aldo

But...

Lloyd

I know. Who could rest at a time like this?

But until I'm done with this thing, there's nothing we can do. So it's better to use this time so we can be ready for when we can do something.

Shionne

He's right. Let's use our time wisely.

Lloyd

Thanks guys.

Alphen

Hey Lloyd. Do you mind if I watch you work?

Lloyd

Really? I mean sure, but it's gonna be pretty boring.

Alphen

Boring? No way!

Seeing the metal change with every swing of the hammer... Watching this ugly rock slowly transform into this thing of beauty... I get excited just thinking about it!

Lloyd

I know, right?!

Oh man. No one back home gets this!

Okay, watch all you want man. This is gonna be awesome!

Alphen

Yeah!

Lloyd

It's done!

Obtained Necklace of the Chosen.

Shionne

Not bad, kid. The rendering of the details in the goldwork made to look like the branches of a tree... The auburn red stone perfectly fit in the center... It's pretty okay.

Aldo

Wait, is this the same Shionne?

Alphen

She has a thing for dresses and accessories.

Shionne

Is there a problem with that? If you want to be taken seriously, you have to take your appearance seriously.

Zelos

Absolutely. Especially when you're dealing with the upper class. They'll look for any reason to act superior. You might have the most gorgeous dress on, but if your shoes look like they fell off the bargain rack, it's over.

Lloyd

I guess? I'm more of a, "as long as you take showers and brush your teeth, you're okay" kinda guy.

Alphen

I'm with Lloyd. I think you worry too much, Shionne. Not that that's a bad thing, of course.

Shionne

Oh, well thank you for letting me know that caring about my appearance is both too much, and not a bad thing. I suppose I just need to EXPLAIN MYSELF a little BETTER.

Aldo

Umm...well... Hey! Now that we've got the necklace, how about we go do the whole save the world thing?

Zelos

Right, well if we are going to get to the girl, we're gonna need another way in. Any ideas?

We should go to the temple.

Aldo

You think she's gone back there?

No. But we won't be looking for her, we'll be looking for the tree...

Zelos

Wait, isn't the tree pretty big? I feel like I'd remember seeing something like that...

Shionne

I don't remember seeing any tree.

Aldo

Same.

Sorry, I should have explained it better. The tree isn't at the temple, but a rift to the tree is. The tree exists in a plane outside of time and space. It would be the fastest way to get to her.

Shionne

Then it looks like we have our marching orders. And it should give me plenty of time to explain to these chuckleheads the importance of style.

Lloyd

But I didn't say anything...

Alphen

Just gotta go with it, man.