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Debt on the High Seas

A man in Elzion suffers under huge debts. The one who racked them up was his great pirate ancestor, Aifread...

6 scenes, 160 lines

1. Scene 1

31 lines
???

I'M RUINED!

Aldo

Did you hear that?

Alphen

Yeah, sounded like from over there.

Lloyd

Let's check it out!

Aldo

Hey, were you shouting just now?

???

I'm...ruined... All this debt, and there's no way I can pay it all back...

Lloyd

How'd you end up owing so much?

???

One of my ancestors got in debt, and we've spent generations trying to pay it back, but it's just too much. It's over 1 billion git now...

Aldo

A b-billion?!

Alphen

I don't know the currency here, but that sounds like a lot of coin...

???

I don't even earn enough to pay the interest... There's no other option but to end it all...

Aldo

Hold on! Don't do anything rash!

Alphen

I want to help out if we can...

Lloyd

Sure, but we can't just take on the debt for him, right?

Aldo

What did this ancestor of yours do to rack up that much debt, anyway?

???

I've heard the story a thousand times, passed down through my family...

Pirate's Descendant

Apparently, he was a notorious pirate based in a place called Acteul.

Through some trivial matter he ended up owing a lot of money.

He sought to repay it by finding some hidden treasure, but...

Lloyd

He didn't manage to do it?

Pirate's Descendant

Oh, he located the treasure, and almost got his hands on it, but something prevented it. So the debt remained unpaid, and continued to grow as interest was added.

My grandfather always said he'd have gone from deep in debt to filthy rich if he got his hands on the treasure... But empty dreams don't pay the bills.

Aldo

...Maybe we CAN do something to help.

Pirate's Descendant

Huh?

Aldo

Sorry. Would you mind waiting while we work this out?

Pirate's Descendant

Well, I don't see any way out of this, but I suppose I could hold tight for now...

Aldo

Thanks! I'll be back soon!

Right...

Alphen

I guess we're doing this, huh?

Lloyd

Yeah! Let's go meet this pirate!

Aldo

Okay! He was based in Acteul, right?

2. Scene 2

19 lines
Aldo

So, where will we find this pirate?

Lloyd

I guess the first place to look for a pirate would be the tavern.

Alphen

Even if he's not there, taverns are a good place to gather info.

Aldo

All right, let's head over!

Alphen

There's nobody here.

Aldo

Let's ask the barkeep.

Hi there. Do you know of a notorious pirate living around these parts?

Bartender

A notorious pirate? I wonder if you mean Aifread.

He's not notorious or anything. Just a treasure seeker who considers himself a bit of a corsair.

He popped the top on one of my most expensive bottles, saying he'd pay me in treasure! He's already racked up a massive tab.

Lloyd

So there's a pirate called Aifread in this world, too...

You wouldn't happen to know where we could find this Aifread, would you?

Bartender

Yeah, the word is he's been hanging around Ratle looking for treasure.

Aldo

Thanks! We appreciate the help!

Bartender

If you see Aifread, tell him he better pay off his tab, or he won't be welcome here anymore.

Aldo

Uh, sure. Understood...

Lloyd

He must have built up a big debt...

Alphen

And if we don't do something, his descendants will be landed with it. Let's head to Ratle, Aldo!

Aldo

All right!

3. Scene 3

28 lines
Aldo

Now where's this Aifread...

Alphen

He's got to be around here somewhere. We could try the tavern again.

Lloyd

Okay, let's do it!

Bartender

Aifread? He's that mopey-looking guy over there.

Aldo

So you're Aifread?

Aifread

Arr? Yeah, that's me. A pirate king in the making.

Lloyd

And you're looking for treasure?

Aifread

I sure am, mateys... But not a soul believes it exists. Even though I have a treasure map to prove it.

Alphen

No luck finding anything?

Aifread

Nay, and if I'm the only one looking, it could take a lifetime...

Aldo

Would you let us help you search for it, then?

Aifread

What? Are ye serious?

Aldo

Sure.

Aifread

Haha. Who'd have thought such a strange lot would offer help. No one else paid me any mind.

I'll say it right now, though, I'll not share a penny with ye. We clear?

Alphen

That's fine by us.

Aifread

Then what's in it for ye?

Lloyd

It's not about profit. Dwarven vow #2! "Never abandon someone in need!"

Aifread

Bahaha! I like you lot!

Aldo

Can you show us that treasure map first?

Aifread

Sure. Here it be.

Aldo

...There's some kind of mark near the Zol Plains.

Aifread

That's what it looks like, right? I've been scouring the Zol Plains, but I've turned up zilch. If there's treasure to be found, there must be some ruins of a kind.

Alphen

Ruins? Hey, Aldo. Do you think it could be that place we were at?

Aifread

You have information?!

Aldo

Yeah, we have an idea, at least.

Aifread

Then take me there!

Aldo

Understood. Follow me!

4. Scene 4

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Aifread

I had no clue this place was here... I can't believe I never found it!

Still, with my expertise, I'd have uncovered it in time. Bahaha!

Lloyd

I dunno...

Alphen

Well, from what we heard, he came close to getting his hands on it, so he must have found the place himself.

Aldo

Any sign of the treasure?

Aifread

Hold yer horses. I know all about these kinds of things.

It must be somewhere around here...

Bahaha! See? Aifread the Pirate King strikes again!

It's treasure time!

Lloyd

It looks like the treasure is ours.

Alphen

I wouldn't be so sure. Remember, something went wrong right before he got his hands on it.

Aifread

Wh-What?!

Aldo

That's Aifread!

Lloyd

Something must have happened! Let's go see!

Alphen

All right!

Aldo

What is it, Aifread?!

Aifread

The treasure's within sight... But look!

Alphen

Ah, so that's what it was!

Aifread

How might we deal with that?!

Lloyd

Don't back down now! You're the Pirate King, right?!

Aifread

Uh, of course... I won't shy away from destiny!

Aldo

That's more like it! And we'll lend a hand!

5. Scene 5

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Aifread

Bahaha... We did it!

Lloyd

Okay, let's take a look at the treasure!

Aifread

No need for haste. The loot won't go running away on us!

Okay, I'm opening it.

What's that?

Aldo

An Axe, by the looks.

Lloyd

THIS is the treasure?

Alphen

I don't see how this will make anyone filthy rich... Filthy, perhaps...

Aldo

It looks like something you'd find covered in cobwebs in an attic.

Aifread

Oh, it's treasure, to be sure.

Aldo

Huh?

Aifread

It's the first treasure plundered by Aifread, the Pirate King! That makes it priceless!

Aldo

The FIRST?!

Aifread

That's right. I've come close to claiming treasure before, but I always panic and turn tail...

I've seen the light, thanks to you. To win fortune, I must conquer me fears!

I swear upon this axe! I'll become a Pirate King and travel the world seeking riches!

Now that's settled, I'd better get me a ship!

Alphen

You don't even have a ship, and you call yourself a pirate?

Aifread

You've all been such a big help. Once I'm crowned as Pirate King, I'll share a little of the loot!

Aldo

Maybe you should pay your drinks tab at the tavern first...

Aifread

Bahaha! Fear not, I'll even throw in a tip!

And now, time to strike while the iron is hot! Later, land lubbers!

Alphen

Off he goes...

Lloyd

So, Aldo. Do you think this will solve that debt issue?

Aldo

I don't know... We better go back and find out...

6. Scene 6

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Aldo

Wasn't his descendent around here somewhere?

Excuse me. Do you know if any family of the pirate Aifread live around here?

Some Guy

Aifread's family? That wealthy lot?

Lloyd

Wealthy?!

Some Guy

Yeah, of course. They hold these strange events from time to time. Everyone knows 'em in these parts.

Alphen

Strange events?

Some Guy

Yeah, they're lookin' to trace the whereabouts of a legendary trio. Somethin' about passing on treasure bequeathed by their ancestor.

All sorts of rabble have shown up claiming to be the trio, but no one's been awarded the loot yet.

I think they were holdin' one in Gamma District earlier.

Aldo

Yeah? Thanks for the info.

Lloyd

Well, it sounds like the debt was taken care of.

Alphen

That trio must be us, right? They're trying to track us down.

Lloyd

Hey, maybe it's about that loot we were promised once Aifread became a pirate king?!

Aldo

Let's go take a look!

Pirate's Descendant

Come! If you match the description of the legendary trio, the treasure's yours! Any takers?

Boy

We're the Dark Trio! I bet that treasure belongs to us!

Pirate's Descendant

Hmm... I'm afraid not... Perhaps try again once you're a little older.

Boy

Tch! Let's get outta here!

Pirate's Descendant

Oh! You three are together, no?

Aldo

Yeah, that's right.

Pirate's Descendant

We have a winner! A trio matching the description has finally materialized! A warrior in blue carrying a massive blade, a dual-wielding swordsman in red, and a masked swordsman with black armor!

Rowdy Man

So THAT'S what you were looking for?! How were we supposed to guess that?!

Pirate's Descendant

Thank heavens! Now I can stop holding these peculiar rallies! Here's your treasure!

Aldo

This is...

Lloyd

It's that axe!

Alphen

Is that a message with it?

See?! Aifread the Pirate King laid claim to all the treasures of the world! A promise is a promise, so here's your share of the loot. This was my most precious treasure. Take good care of it!

Alphen

Well, he was true to his word...

Lloyd

He freed his descendant from all that debt, anyway!

Aldo

Yeah. I guess the axe will make a good memento.

Lloyd

I have to admit I had higher hopes when he offered to give us a cut.

Alphen

Yeah, this axe is too old to be any use in battle.

Aldo

It's got a good weight to it, though.

Alphen

I guess Aifread had all sorts of great adventures with this axe at his side.

Lloyd

Yeah... I hope I get to sail the seas one day, too!