Another Eden story ยท Character quests, May

Women can be Blacksmiths too!

The blacksmith's daughter, May, is young, but already a smithing genius! It seems she's become inundated with requests for armor...

6 scenes, 121 lines

1. Scene 1

36 lines
May

Ah! You know no matter how many times I come to Unigan it never fails to impress!

Aldo

H-Hey, just calm down, will you? I don't want people thinking we're country bumpkins.

May

What? B-But it's like a festival here, it's so much fun! Aren't you getting excited? Let's take a look around!

Young Lady

Ah?!

May

Whoa! I'm sorry! Are you all right?

Young Lady

Y-Yes. I'm not as frail as I look. Huh? Wait, aren't you May from Baruoki?

May

Huh? My name is May, but...

Aldo

A friend of yours, May?

May

Umm...no? I'm sorry, have we met before?

Young Lady

I think this is the first time we've met. But word of your arrival into Unigan has spread like wild fire. There aren't many female blacksmiths of your caliber, much less ones from Baruoki.

May

Huh?! People are talking about me? How embarrassing...

Young Lady

They also say you're very stylish and popular with the boys!

May

Now you're just exaggerating, surely!

Aldo

Wow, you're that popular? Good for you, May.

May

Aldo, what are you saying? You don't believe her, do you?

Young Lady

I was surprised to find you were even cuter than they said! I imagine your skills as a blacksmith equally outperform the rumors!

May

N-No, I doubt that...

Young Lady

Well, it must be fate that led me here. I was hoping you could make some armor for me.

May

W-Wait! This is all quite sudden...

Young Lady

You see, I'm a warrior. In fact, I'm a member of the guards.

May

O-Oh, I didn't realize. Your work must be hard...

Young Lady

I came here to look for some new armor, but nothing really caught my eye. But I'm sure that you could make the perfect armor for me, something I can be proud to wear! I won't accept any substitutes, it has to be a May original!

You see... *whisper whisper*

May

O-Oh! I see.

It's just that I've never actually made...

Young Lady

You're saying you won't do this for me?

May

Well, uh...

O-Okay! I'll do what I can. So cheer up, okay?

Young Lady

You will?! Thank you!

May

Now, erm... Aldo, just wait here.

Aldo

Huh? Where are you going? Why can't I go with you?

May

D-Don't worry about it!

Young Lady

Please, do your best.

Aldo

What were you two up to?

May

I was measuring...I mean... Nothing! Why worry about the boring details? Anyway, we need to go get the materials I need for the armor. I need ore from the Moonlight Forest. Can you help me get it?

Aldo

Fine, but what's going on?

2. Scene 2

9 lines
Aldo

Beasts?! What are they doing here?

Beast

Heheheh. Without the ore, humans won't be able to make weapons. You! Make sure we get all the ore!

May

You...

Wait! Just stop what you're doing!

Beast

Huh? Who the hell are you?

May

Does that matter?! Just stop what you're doing! Ore is used for more than weapons. People use it to make pots and cutlery. It's something that everyone needs for their everyday lives!

Beast

I don't care about all of that, as long as you can't make weapons!

May

But the material's done nothing wrong...

Okay...you have guts. But I'll make you see the error of your ways!

3. Scene 3

6 lines
May

Heheheh! And don't come back!

Aldo

Quite a spirited attack. Have you been bottling something up?

May

He got in my way, I just moved him out of it. And we got the ore, too! Now I can make some awesome armor! ......

Y-Yeah... I'll make the armor now... Ugh...

Aldo

Huh? Why are you all jittery all of a sudden?

May

I-It's nothing! I have to hurry! Let's go back to Baruoki, to my home!

4. Scene 4

18 lines
May

Aldo, sorry, but I need to concentrate!

Aldo

Oh, right. I'll stay out of your way. I'll be waiting here.

May

O-Okay. See you later!

Aldo

Oh, hey there. Is something wrong?

Some Guy

Oho, have you been kicked out to let May concentrate on her smithing? You've been traveling with her, haven't you? How has it been? She hasn't gotten in your way, has she?

Aldo

Not at all, in fact she's been a great help. She's a joy to be around, and a great friend. Just now she routed a whole horde of beasts.

Are you finished, May?

May

No. I couldn't do it.

Some Guy

Come now, you've made a hundred suits of armor.

May

B-But this is no ordinary suit of armor...

Aldo

Not ordinary? How hard can it be?

Some Guy

In that case, I guess I'll have to help you.

May

D-Don't worry... I can do it!

Some Guy

So? What kind of armor is it?

May

Shush! I told you to drop it! Aldo, there's something I want to talk to you about, so can you come with me to the Nuaru Uplands?

Some Guy

Okay, I'll join you.

May

Dad, no! This is embarrassing, I don't want you to be a part of this!

Some Guy

Wh-What are you saying? Whatever. Aldo, you better keep her safe.

5. Scene 5

28 lines
Aldo

So what do you need to talk about so badly?

May

Well, you see... It's about the armor...

Aldo

Just what kind of armor have you been asked to make?

May

It's for a wo...

Aldo

Hm? What kind of armor? If you don't tell me, I can't help you.

May

It's armor for a woman! She wants it to be form fitting!

Aldo

Oh...I see. S-So that's why it's tricky to make?

May

The curves are proving...tricky... And the details are...

Aldo

Tricky? Is it a weird shape or something?

May

It's not like that.

It's just that it needs to be girly. With a girly look and girly contours. What do I know about things like that? I have no idea how to make anything girly.

Aldo

Where's the problem? You're girly, and kind.

May

Wh-Wh-What are you saying?! I'm not girly at all! My pops always tells me that I should be more ladylike!

Aldo

He does? But you seem pretty girly to me.

Yes. Looking at you now, you're much more girly than you were when we were kids.

May

...?!

Wh-Wh-Wha...! What are you saying, Aldo?!

Aldo

What?! What's wrong, all of a sudden?! Did I say something wrong?

May

Than when I was a kid? Just what are you insinuating?! Are you saying just because I've grown...in some places... that all of a sudden I'm girlier?!

Aldo

N-No! That's not what I said! You're putting words in my mouth!

May

But it's what you think, isn't it?

Aldo

No...well...maybe.

May

I knew it! You're just like all the other boys! I should teach you a lesson with my hammer right here!

Aldo

N-No! It's not just that! I meant things like you grow your hair out now!

May

Oh...right, my hair.

Aldo

Yes. And what I mean is that I think you're definitely girly enough to make this armor!

May

O-Okay... I'll try again.

Aldo

Yeah, let's get back to Baruoki and give it another go. I know you can do it.

6. Scene 6

24 lines
May

Okay, this time I'll do it, for sure.

Some Guy

She must've tried on every piece of armor in this place. What's going on?

Aldo

E-Erm...

I haven't said anything! Anyway, did you manage to make the armor?

May

Yes! Heheheh! It's more perfect than perfection itself!

???

Really?!

May

Huh? Why... Are you here for your armor?

Young Lady

Yes! I just couldn't wait any longer!

May

This is how it's turned out. I hope it's all right.

Young Lady

Wow, incredible! I know it's going to suit me already, and I haven't even put it on yet! The design is so cute! I'm so glad I came to you, May!

May

Ahahah, I'm so glad you like it! Though you're making me blush a bit now.

Young Lady

You deserve all the praise I can give. It's so girly and...

May

Yes, thank you! P-Please, you've said enough!

Some Guy

......

May

Let me know if the fit is off. I'll adjust it for free.

Young Lady

Okay. It really is so cute, thank you so much!

Aldo

She sure seemed pleased. That's great, isn't it?

May

I guess. It's been a good experience.

Some Guy

So you're leaving me out of it? Fine... *sob*

May

H-Hey, let's not do this in front of Aldo, okay?

Some Guy

What?! But you're the one with the secrets. You're still such a child, trying to keep things from your old man!

May

Hah! A child? How can you call me that, when I help you out so much?

Hmph. Aldo, let's go! I'll train up, and one day you'll see I'm no child!

Aldo

You never change, do you?