Another Eden story ยท Character quests, Dewey

Smoke's Up!

While walking around the streets of the future, Dewey and Aldo find themselves in a complicated situation...

6 scenes, 180 lines

1. Scene 1

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Lady

Ohhh! Not again! I always spend too much in there!

I just can't say no to all these adorable clothes though! Think I bought too many too!

Dewey

Haha whoa! There's a clothes store here as well?

Aldo

Wait, but aren't you from around here, Dewey? You don't seem to know the area very well.

Dewey

Haha, yeah... I suppose you could say that.

Aldo

Oookay then...

Staff Member's Voice

Thank you very much! Please come again, anytime.

Dewey

Oh man! I can't wait till I can pull off a suit like that. All stylish 'n' cool!

Youth

Hey! What the heck! Watch where you're going, you decrepit old man!

Elderly Man

Oh... I'm terribly sorry about that young man. My sight isn't what it used to be, you see.

Youth

You think sorry is going to cut it?! You messed up my best suit!

Some Guy

What's going on over there?

Young Man

Is it a fight? That guy looks really mad. Looks like that old timer did something.

Youth

Well don't just stand there looking senile! How're you gonna rectify this, huh?! I gotta go meet an important lady friend soon. And there's no way I'm gonna be able to get this cleaned in time for that now, is there!

Elderly Man

Well how about I buy you a new...

Youth

You even know how much this thing costs?! I won't accept any old shabby threads, you hear!

Aldo

That's going too far! All he did was bump into you by accident!

Dewey

You take a chill pill too, Aldo. Just leave this mess to me.

Let's call it a day, all right? You're not even a little embarrassed for yelling at this poor old dude, huh? Kinda pathetic, if you ask me. That suit is completely wasted on a chump like you.

Youth

What'd you say, you little brat?!

Dewey

Your suit got dirty right? Then I'll give it the cleaning that you say it needs so bad!

Youth

What the, ?

Dewey

There you go. Suit's as good as new, and you've cooled off a bit too, two birds, one stone!

Youth

Ohhh, why I'm gonna... I'm soaking wet now, you stupid brat! Think 'cos you can shoot a little bit of water from your finger, that I'm not gonna whale on you, huh?!

Dewey

Well that's where you're wrong. This is all nano tech. It's a gun that produces steam, just in case you were interested.

Youth

I didn't ask, and I don't care! I'm an adult. And Elzion will fall out of the sky before I let a kid like you get the better of me!

Dewey

Might wanna hold off before you go talking all big with, "adult this, adult that." And just to let you know, that little squirt just now was weakest setting I have.

But I won't hold back next time.

Youth

Um...

Mommy! Help meee!

Dewey

Well, what do you know the body of an adult with the mind of a child.

Elderly Woman

Oh, you were ever so brave facing off that man like that. It's so refreshing to see children stand up for the elderly.

Dewey

Children? Grr. I better get some growth spurts soon, or I'm gonna go crazy!

Elderly Man

Th-thank you ever so much.

Aldo

You all right there, gramps? What happened back there anyway?

Elderly Man

I was just mullin' over a little problem I had see. Doing the old walky-thinky thing, then all of a sudden I start getting yelled at.

Aldo

Problem? If you want, you could...

Elderly Man

Oh my! Is that the time! I'm supposed to be meeting somebody now! You'll have to excuse me, young sirs. I gotta get myself to the Entrance Gate, on the double.

Aldo

Wait, hang on a second!

Hmm... I'm kinda worried about him.

Dewey

Who? The old guy? Yeah, me too. Wanna go after him, make sure he's okay?

Aldo

You don't mind? Thanks, Dewey. I heard him say something about the Entrance Gate. Let's head over there.

2. Scene 2

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Elderly Man

Hmm... This is peculiar.

Dewey

What's peculiar?

Elderly Man

Oh my! It's you from just a moment ago. What a coincidence meeting again! World sure is a small place.

Dewey

Haha! It's not a coincidence at all. We followed you here!

Aldo

We thought your problem must be pretty serious for you to bump into people and all. I thought you said you were meeting somebody here? Haven't they turned up yet?

Elderly Man

A keen set of ears you have there. They were supposed to be here already. Oh... I do hope nothing has happened to them.

Dewey

You're overthinking it! I'm sure the Cargo Bus just got held up somewhere.

Elderly Man

I hope you are right...

???

Graaandpaaa!

Elderly Man

That's her voice!

Young Lady

Oh, I'm so sorry to keep you waiting! My appointment went on longer than I thought it would.

Elderly Man

Don't worry about me. I'm just glad that you are safe.

Young Lady

So, umm... Who are these people?

Elderly Man

I had a little bit of trouble with an angry young man who I bumped into in town. It looked like I was going to have to pay for another tasteless suit for him until these two showed up.

Young Lady

Wow! Sounds like you've had an eventful morning! Thank you for looking out for my grandpa. It's terrible what people can get upset about these days, huh?

Aldo

I really didn't do anything. If you're going to thank anyone, thank Dewey here.

Young Lady

Oh, okay. Hey, Dewey, thanks for protecting my grandpa.

Dewey

It was nothing really...

Young Lady

Ohhh! You're so cute, all shy!

Elderly Man

Anyway, did you get the results?

Young Lady

Nothing good. Seems they won't do anything until there's an actual threat.

Aldo

Threat?

Young Lady

Recently, we think that there has been someone hanging around outside our house.

Elderly Man

I've felt like I'm being watched by somebody when I'm at home.

Young Lady

Which is really scary, right? So I went to talk with the EGPD, to see if they would do anything about it. But they didn't really take me seriously.

Aldo

Well, if you don't mind, we'd be happy to help? I've never been good at ignoring someone in trouble.

Young Lady

You would?! Oh, thank you so much!

Elderly Man

If you're sure, then we'll happily accept your offer.

Young Lady

Our home's in the Theta District. Would you be okay meeting up in front of the Xeno Prisma there?

Aldo

That's fine with me. Okay, well, we'll see you later then.

Dewey

You're a real people person, huh, Aldo? I don't think many people would just help random strangers like that.

Aldo

You're the same, aren't you? You were the one who helped the old timer in the first place.

Dewey

But that was less about helping out the old guy, and more that "mister fancy suit" got on my nerves.

Anyway, I guess we should head to Theta District now.

3. Scene 3

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Young Lady

You came! Thank you again for doing this for us.

Aldo

No problem. Where's your grandpa?

Young Lady

He's just gone off to do a bit of shopping. He should be back soon though. Let me show you our house in the meantime.

Dewey

So what exactly can we do to help? I supposed we could question everyone who looks fishy walking near your house?

Young Lady

I don't think that will work. You'll put the real culprit on guard if they see you investigating everyone like that.

Dewey

You mean...

Elderly Man

What we need is a stakeout!

Dewey

Yes! A stakeout! Umm that's the one when you wait for the criminal to show up and do something criminal, right?

Elderly Man

That's exactly it. And to make sure you can stay focused for as long as it takes, I went a little overboard with the shopping.

Food, drink, sleeping bags, and some, oh yes, magazines... Well those are for a lonely old man, but the rest is yours!

Young Lady

Oh grandpa! Don't you think you're getting a bit too excited? I know it must be fun having other guys around for a change and all.

Aldo

No, I think gramps has the right idea. We could be at this for a while, and it never hurts to be over prepared.

Dewey

Now I'm getting excited!

Young Lady

Okay. Well, let's go then. Follow me.

Elderly Man

Well, this is my room. This may be a stakeout, but I doubt anything will happen straight away. Just make yourselves at home for the time being.

Young Lady

I'm going to go back to my place for a bit. Just ask my grandpa if you need anything, okay? I'll let you know right away if I notice anything strange on my end.

Aldo

Her place? Wait, so they aren't living together then?

Dewey

I guess. It's pretty common for families to live separately these days.

But for a regular housing unit, this place has a great view!

I could stakeout in a place like this for...

......

Aldo

......

Lost Drone

......

Dewey

I think we've found what's been looking in on these guys!

Aldo

You don't say!

Dewey

Looks like it flew towards Route 99. Let's get after it before we lose sight of it!

Aldo

Route 99? Got it! Let's chase it down!

Elderly Man

Oh ho? Where'd they go already? Looks like old gramps is on his lonesome, yet again...

4. Scene 4

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Dewey

There it is! I think that's the drone from earlier! If we can get access to its picture banks, then we'll be able to say for sure if it's the one that was looking into the house.

Aldo

Great! Let's catch it before it flies off again. I don't wanna spend all day chasing after this thing.

5. Scene 5

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Aldo

Nice! We got it before it could get away.

Dewey

Right! Now I can have a look at what it's got stored on it.

Let's see... I take this out... Connect that to this... Pat my head and rub my tummy... Bingo! It's slideshow time!

Huh?

What is all this?!

Aldo

Dewey, what's wrong?

???

Just stop right there!

Elderly Woman

Oh, well I never! Look at this mess!

Aldo

What? Umm... Who are you?

Dewey

Just what's the big idea, huh! All the pictures in this drone are of the old guy! And there's like, literally hundreds of them!

Aldo

Whoa, really?! And, I guess the reason you're all the way out here is that you own this thing, right?

Elderly Woman

That's right! And what is it to you, hmm?

Aldo

Wait, so you were the one peeping on the old timer then?!

Elderly Woman

P-Peeping?! What a nasty accusation! I just wanted to...check up on him... Without causing him any nuisance, of course!

Oh, just to see his kind, warm face. That silky, soft gray mane of his, those devilishly handsome gray whiskers...

Just basking in his glory from the other side of a screen was more than enough for me!

Aldo

But why would you need to use a drone?

Elderly Woman

I...

I couldn't possibly tell him how I feel now, could I? Not at this age.

Dewey

You really think so?

Elderly Woman

Huh?

Dewey

Age's got nothing to do with it, I tell ya. You know, people's lives are more fleeting than we like to think...

If you go through life never being able to say what you really want, you'll only be left with regret at the end of it all. Let's go together, to the old guy's place. When we get there, you can tell him everything on your mind, in person. I know you'll feel much better for it.

Elderly Woman

I'm not sure, I... No, you know what, you're right. Wow. I never thought I would be getting life lessons from a child.

Dewey

I'm not a child! And I have a name, you know! It's Dewey!

Elderly Woman

Oh, well I do apologize. Dewey, I'll make sure not to forget it.

Dewey

Okay. Let's go, Aldo.

Aldo

Sure. You wanna bring her back to the old timer's home in Theta District? I'm sure he'll still be there waiting for us.

6. Scene 6

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Elderly Man

You're back! I had no idea where you'd gone. One moment you were here, and the next, gone! Had an old man worried...

Aldo

Yeah, sorry about that. Everything just kinda happened. But we found out who's been snooping around your house this whole time.

Elderly Man

Really?!

Aldo

Well, actually we've brought them along with us. I think you should listen to what they have to say before you do anything else.

Dewey

Come on in, grandma. It's time for some explaining.

Elderly Woman

Yes, well... Umm...

Elderly Man

Have I had the pleasure of meeting you somewhere before? You seem familiar somehow.

Elderly Woman

I am afraid not. I have always just been, gazing from afar.

I have been appreciating you from the shadows for oh so long now. But I got worried and approached you after that rude man started yelling at you.

And then I discover that my...admiring... had been the cause of your recent distress. Oh, I am ever so sorry. I never meant to trouble you like this.

Elderly Man

I see. Well, no harm done. I won't press charges either. Everyone is okay, and there was no malicious intent, after all.

Elderly Woman

But...

Elderly Man

I can't very well let you go unrebuked. Everyone will think I have gone soft now, won't they?

Elderly Woman

Oh... I suppose you're right.

Elderly Man

Yes. As punishment, let's see... I know, you can come help me manage the dorms, how about that?

Elderly Woman

No, anything but th, wait, dorms?

Aldo

Yeah, what dorms?

Dewey

Old timer, you manage a dormitory?

Elderly Man

I didn't say? I suppose things happened so quickly I forgot to mention it. The room is actually the surveillance room for the dorms.

Aldo

Is that right?

Elderly Man

It is indeed. Anyway, please come back here, bright and early tomorrow.

Elderly Woman

Y-Yes...

Dewey

Phew! Glad all that's over now.

Young Lady

I think so too. I was a little worried there for a moment, but everything ended for the best it seems.

Aldo

But I can see why she wouldn't want to barge in on his life after seeing how well he gets along with his granddaughter.

Young Lady

Excuse me? What granddaughter?

Aldo

Huh? You, obviously.

Young Lady

But we're not related, you know? I'm pretty sure grandpa's been single his entire life, up until now.

Aldo

Umm... What now?

Young Lady

He's just the manager for my company's women-only dorm. He's always been so kind and caring towards everyone that we all just ended up calling him grandpa. Myself included, of course.

Aldo

A women-only dorm?!

Dewey

So that's why they were living in different places then!

Young Lady

And when I told them all about how you rescued grandpa, they all wanted to show their gratitude.

Dewey

You don't mean...

???

Is that him?! Our little hero, Dewey!

Dewey

Oh man!

Young Lady

Yeah! That's him! And you'll never guess what. He also found out who was watching grandpa as well!

Girls

No way! So he's an adorable detective as well as a hero?!

Dewey

Nah, it was nothing. I...

Girls

Oh! Look he's all embarrassed!

Ohhh! He's going all red! He's just the cutest thing I've ever seen!

Dewey

I am not going red! I...

Aldo

Whoa! Dewey, you okay there?!

Girls

Aww, you don't need to be nervous! We won't bite. Well, not much anyway! Muahaha!

Tee hee hee! He's sooo adorable!

Dewey

No more... I...can't...