GODDESS OF VICTORY: NIKKE story ยท Event stories

BOW-WOW PARADISE

15 scenes, 996 lines

1. Runaway Dog

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Inside the shelter, it is somewhere between spacious and cramped.

The building is equipped with all the necessary facilities, including a training center, a playroom and an examination room.

Each dog is placed inside a well-maintained cage that is spotless.

Max

*Ahwoooo*

One healthy-looking dog with a muscular build and soft coat of fur begins to yelp.

The abrupt cry shows that this dog is the leader of the pack.

Puppies

*Yip*

In response, several other dogs cry out in quick succession.

Max

*Ruff ruff*

Puppies

*Arf arf arf*

The dogs bark and yip amongst one another, holding constant canine communication.

... *Ta-da-dak*

Their ears all perk up.

*Chakchakchak*

There is the sound of someone running towards the shelter.

Suddenly, all the dogs race back to their individual cages.

*Beep* *Beeeep* *Beep* *Dringgg*

*Zing*

Biscuit

Time to eat, everyone!

Since you all were so good this morning, I prepared something special for you.

It's some special Kibble fresh from Royal Road!

*Pour*

Biscuit

Max, I know chicken breast is your favorite flavor, so here you are.

*Pourrr*

Biscuit

Lily, you said you like beef flavor, right?

Biscuit starts to apportion the kibble according to each dog's preference.

*Click*

Biscuit

All right, everybody, you can come out now.

*Ta-dak* *Ta-dak*

The dogs all bound out of their cages and stand in front of their individual bowls.

Biscuit

Not yet!

Wait until I say it's okay.

...

... Good.

Go ahead.

*Crunch*

*Crunch crunch* *Chomp* *Chomp*

The dogs under Biscuit's care all tear into their food ravenously.

Biscuit

Such smart doggies.

Does it taste good?

I wonder...

Max

*Ruff*

Biscuit

Oh no, it's okay. You go ahead.

... Maybe just one bite.

Max

*Ruff ruff*

Biscuit

Thanks. Just a little bite.

Omnomnom.

...

Omnomnomnom!

Omnomnomnomnom...!

Max

*Whine*

Biscuit

Whoops, guess I ate a bit too much... huh?

Max

*Whine*

Biscuit

Is your stomach not feeling well?

Is the kibble not agreeing with you? I'll go fetch you some medicine.

Wait right here.

Max

*Ruff*

*Stomp* *Stomp*

Max

...

Max keeps his gaze fixated on Biscuit.

Biscuit

I'm pretty sure I had some indigestion medicine laying around here somewhere.

*Beep* *Beeeep* *Beep* *Dringgg*

*Zing*

Max

*Yeep*

*Ruff ruff*

Puppies

*Arf arf arf*

*Craaaashh*

Biscuit

Wh-what the... guys, wait! What are you...!

The moment Biscuit opens the door to the shelter, Max signals to the other dogs.

*Dadadada*

Without a moment's hesitation, the entire pack of dogs make a mad dash for the door.

Biscuit

Wait, stop!

In an instant, every last dog has liberated itself from the shelter.

2. Looking for Lost Dogs: A

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*Beeeeep*

Biscuit

Guys, stop!

*Beeeeeeep*

Biscuit blows frantically on her whistle as she chases after the runaway dogs,

but they pay her no mind.

Biscuit

*Pant, pant* G-guyyys!

The rest of the pack follows Max, running at full speed.

Biscuit

Wh... What's going on?

I've got to follow them.

*Swooshhh*

Before long, however, the dogs vanish off into the distance.

Biscuit

Which way did they go...?

There's no way I can catch up to them.

This is awful!

Biscuit's ears and tail droop despondently.

Biscuit

What should I do now? I don't even know where to start...

???

*Yawwwn*

*Turn*

Biscuit

Nero?

Nero

Hey there.

Nero is laying placidly on a patch of grass.

Biscuit

What is that smell? Is that... freshly baked bread?

Nero

That's right.

*Purr purr*

Biscuit

Wowzer, I can hear your purring all the way over here. You must be happy.

Wait, I've gotta stay focused!

Nero! I've got an emergency!

The dogs escaped from the shelter!

*Rub rub*

Nero starts grooming herself as she listens to Biscuit.

Nero

How did they escape? I thought the shelter was well-secured.

Biscuit

I...

I was feeding the dogs, and then Max suddenly said something about not feeling well.

I opened the door to give him some medicine,

and when I did, Max suddenly began howling.

All the other dogs barged towards the door and escaped.

Nero

Sounds like Max is the problem.

Ask Leona for help.

Biscuit

Leona is busy right now.

Nero

Then go to the Scoops.

Biscuit

!!

Right, I forgot about Trainer!

Trainer knows the Ark's layout inside and out.

Nero

*Meow*

Nero closes her eyes again.

Biscuit

Thanks for the help, Nero!

3. Looking for Lost Dogs: B

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You

The dogs escaped from the shelter?

Biscuit

... Yes.

It's all my fault. I'm sorry to drag you into this,

but can you help me look for them?

You

Biscuit stares at me woefully, her eyes welling up.

Your choice

Pet her on the head.

Pet her on the shoulder.

Biscuit

Thank you for cheering me up.

You

Is there any chance of the dogs being in danger?

Biscuit

No, we don't have to worry about that.

I might have to explain a few things.

Only certain members of the upper class can have pets,

and even then, you need approval from the Central Government.

If anyone took one of those dogs without permission, the Central Government would throw the book at them.

The Ark's animal protection laws are quite strict, and heavily enforced.

The only thing that worries me is

one of them getting hurt or causing a problem.

None of them have been to the Ark before.

You

??

Not even once?

Biscuit

Not a one. They've been at the shelter ever since they were little pups. Many of them still haven't been trained properly.

There's no need for them to visit the Ark anyway. The shelter has everything they'd possibly need.

There's a training center, an examination room, a play room...

You

Biscuit's ears droop down while she speaks.

What's wrong?

Biscuit

Why do you think the dogs ran away?

They've never done that before.

You

Why don't we ask them?

You

Let's find the dogs and ask them.

There must be a reason.

Biscuit

... Right!

There has to be a reasonable explanation.

You

Biscuit's eyes start to sparkle.

Biscuit

Let's hurry!

You

You got it.

*Zing*

Biscuit

Oh! Wait!

Oh no...

You

??

Biscuit

I just got a message from the police station.

4. Canine Commotion: A

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Puppies

*Arf arf*

*Arf arf arf*

*Grrrr*

Miranda

Poli, we've got to put these dogs in the jail cell!

Poli

Absolutely not!

I'm not going to lock up a few innocent dogs.

Jail cells are for criminals who have done something wrong.

Miranda

But... these dogs have been causing all sorts of problems.

Doesn't that count?

Poli

They haven't committed any serious crimes.

Besides, there's no such thing as a bad dog. They just don't exist.

Puppies

*Sniff sniff*

*Shhhhh*

Miranda

... That one is peeing on your shoe.

Poli

...

Poli

... Miranda.

Perhaps we can put them in a cell until Biscuit shows up.

*Zing*

Biscuit

Poli!

Poli

Ah, Biscuit. You're just in time.

You

Poli, your shoe...

Biscuit

*Gasp* Did one of my dogs do that?

Miranda

They sure did. I think it was marking its territory.

Your choice

Perhaps it felt a sense of kinship with her.

Maybe it thought she was a dog.

Poli

Commander, how many times have I told you, I'm not a dog! Grrrr...

Biscuit

I'm sorry! I'll buy you a new pair of shoes.

Poli

Don't worry about it.

They'll be good as new after I wash them.

Anyway, how did so many dogs end up in the Ark?

Did they escape from the shelter?

Biscuit

Yes... I lost track of them for a moment...

Poli

Oh boy. Bad things start to happen once you let dogs out of your sight.

You

How did you catch the dogs?

Poli

A bunch of citizens brought them here one by one.

These guys have been traipsing around the Ark getting into a whole bunch of trouble.

Biscuit

Have you gotten many complaints?

*Ring* *Ring* *Ring*

Miranda

That's putting it mildly. As you can see, they're still coming in.

Biscuit

Oh dear... what exactly was the nature of the complaints?

Miranda

Let's see...

3 instances of vandalism of Ark property.

12 counts of public urination on a telephone pole.

20 counts of defecating in the streets.

7 counts of digging holes on public property.

And approximately 35 noise complaints.

You

...

Poli

...

Biscuit

I can't tell you how sorry I am!

I'll do everything I can to make this right.

Poli

Don't worry, this is what dogs do.

We'll handle all the complaints.

You two take care of the dogs we've gathered so far.

You

Thank you for being so understanding.

Biscuit

Thank you!

You

Biscuit and I walk towards the dogs who are gathered in the middle of the police station lobby.

Are you going to scold them?

Biscuit

Of course not. Scolding them straight away isn't the proper way to discipline them.

...

Listen up, all of you. Leaving the shelter like that so suddenly is not good.

You

Biscuit stares each of the dogs in the eye and begins to reprimand them in a stern but subdued tone of voice.

Puppies

*Whine*

Biscuit

Can any of you explain what happened?

Puppies

* Arf*

*Arf arf*

Biscuit

... That can't be true!

You

What's wrong?

Biscuit

They were all following Max's lead. He's the one who proposed leaving the shelter.

But that can't be...

You

Who is Max?

Biscuit

One of the dogs at the shelter.

He's kind of their unofficial leader.

He's as smart as a whip, and usually incredibly well-behaved...

I think our best course of action is to find Max and ask him what's going on.

You all stay inside your cages, okay?

*Zing*

Max

*Owwwww*

Biscuit

Max?!

Miranda

How the... that dog just opened the door by itself and waltzed right in!

It must be some kind of genius!

Poli

Miranda, focus on the issue at hand!

Max

*Ruff ruff*

Biscuit

Everyone, block the door! Max is trying to break the dogs free!

Poli

Hold on to them!

Max

*Arooooo*

*Ruff ruff*

Puppies

*Arf arf arf*

*Ta-da-dak*

You

Max scrambles around frantically, leading the dogs towards the main door.

Biscuit

Don't let them escape!

Miranda

There are two of them to the right, and four on the left heading right for you!

Poli

Grrrrowl... You guys!

*Craaasssh*

You

We all bump into each other and fall over.

...

Poli

...

*Zing*

You

Max runs out of the police station, taking the rest of the dogs with him.

Poli

Miranda, you were supposed to catch the dogs! Why did you catch me?!

Miranda

... I got confused.

You

And with that, we lost the dogs.

5. Canine Commotion: B

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Biscuit

We need to track down Max.

You

Why is he doing this?

Biscuit

Your guess is as good as mine.

...

But he must have a good reason.

As I said before, Max is a really smart dog.

He's my little helper, and he often cheers me up whenever I'm feeling down.

Poli

It sounds like you and the dogs at the shelter are really close.

Miranda

I can sense how much you love them.

Poli

Whatever reason Max has for doing this, it can't be bad.

Biscuit

I think that as well.

After all, there's no such thing as a bad dog.

Poli

Agreed.

Biscuit

I knew you would.

You

That's because she's very dog-like.

Poli

Grrrrr... I'm not a dog!

Hmph!

Anyway, where do you think they could have gone?

Biscuit

I've got to go to whichever place the dogs are frequenting most often.

Wherever the most complaints have come from.

*Ring*

Miranda

We just received a complaint from the shopping mall.

Poli

A place with lots of people...

You

Should we check out the shopping mall?

Biscuit

Good idea.

Poli

We'll go on patrol and keep our eyes open as well.

Biscuit

Thank you, Poli.

Ooh! I have something for you...

*Crumble* *Crumble*

Biscuit

Here you go! Enjoy it!

Poli

What is it?

Biscuit

A sweet potato stick. It's one of my favorites!

I figured you might like it as well.

Miranda

Poli is gaga for these things!

Poli

This is perfect! I just ran out of snacks recently.

Thanks, Biscuit!

Biscuit

You're welcome!

You

All right, let's get going.

6. Max: A

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*Crackkk*

*Crasssh*

Middle-aged Woman

Someone get those dogs!

*Crushh*

Clerk

No! Dogs can't eat those!

Citizen

That one is huge! What an adorable big boi!

You

The moment we arrive at the shopping mall, we see Max and the other dogs wreaking havoc.

*Beeeeep*

Biscuit

Max! Gather your friends together and get over here!

Max

...

*Whip*

*Ta-da-dak*

You

Max stares at Biscuit for a brief moment, then takes off with blinding speed.

Biscuit

Max...!

*Crassssh*

You

Forget Max, let's just focus on grabbing the other dogs!

Biscuit

Okay!

Citizen

Let me help too!

Biscuit

Thank you.

Citizen

Awww, aren't you a cutie? Here's a treat.

You

Aren't those meant for humans?

Citizen

Oh, right. Dogs can't eat this.

*Scrumble* *Scrumble*

Biscuit

Here, take a sweet potato stick. Dogs go crazy for them, and humans can eat them too.

You

...?

Citizen

This is my first stint as a dog catcher. How do I grab them?

I heard it's not good to lift them by their front legs.

Hey, over here! I caught one!

Biscuit

!!

Thank you!

Soon after.

Puppies

*Arf arf*

*Bam*

You

Thanks to some good Samaritans, we were able to capture the dogs without too much hassle.

One by one, the dogs are put into the cages that Biscuit brought along.

Biscuit

Okay, let's book it back to the shelter.

You

Is Max the only one left?

Biscuit

That's right.

You

Biscuit turns to look at Max, who is staring at her quietly.

*Stomp*

*Ta-dak*

You

Every time Biscuit takes a step forward, Max takes a step back.

Biscuit

... Fine.

Let's just talk.

Can you tell me why you escaped?

Max

...

Biscuit

If there is something bothering you, please tell me!

We shouldn't have any secrets between us.

Max

... *Ruff ruff*

*Ta-da-dak*

You

Max barks once and runs off.

Biscuit

Max said...

He doesn't want to come back to the shelter.

7. Max: B

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You

Biscuit heads towards the dogs that have been captured.

Biscuit

Guys.

Max says he doesn't want to come back to the shelter. Care to fill me in?

Puppies

*Whine*

Biscuit

I won't scold you.

None of you have done anything wrong, and neither has Max.

There must be a reason for your actions.

Perhaps I owe all of you an apology. I should have paid more attention to your feelings...

You

The dogs avoid making eye contact with Biscuit.

Biscuit

Hmm...

*Scrumble* *Scrumble*

Biscuit

If you tell me, I'll give you three sweet potato sticks.

Puppies

!!

*Arf arf*

*Arf arf arf*

*Arf arf arf arf arf aaaarf*

Your choice

They might act tough, but at the end of the day, they're still dogs.

Seems like snacks are their weakness.

Biscuit

Hehe, aren't they adorable?

Such innocent little babies.

Puppies

*Arf arf*

*Arf arf arf*

Biscuit

*Gasp* Really?

I had no idea!

I see...

Puppies

*Arf arf arf*

Biscuit

Okay, thank you for telling me.

Trainer!

I found out why Max left the shelter.

You

What is the reason?

Biscuit

It's because he... was curious about the Ark.

...

Now that I think about it, Max has always had a keen interest in the Ark.

Every once in a while, he'd ask me about it.

What kind of place it was, what goes on at Royal Road, stuff like that.

I'd regale him with stories of my time spent there pet-sitting.

I think those stories may have encouraged him, especially since he'd never stepped outside the shelter walls.

All the other dogs followed Max out of curiosity, and they had a ball once they were out.

A new environment. Wide open spaces.

People who think they're the cutest thing ever.

There are some things out here that the shelter doesn't have, I can't deny that. And we don't get many visitors.

Spending their entire life in the shelter must have felt restricting after a while.

How could I not have realized that when Max asked me about the Ark?

Your choice

Just because you're close, doesn't mean you know everything.

Sometimes, the more you get to know someone, the less you know.

Biscuit

*Sigh*

*Smack*

You

Biscuit smacks her cheeks with the palms of her hands.

Biscuit

Now's not the time to get fall into a downward spiral!

I've gotta find Max first.

Then I can focus on fixing the issue once and for all.

The dogs' happiness is the top priority.

Your choice

Very admirable of you.

That's using the ol' noggin.

Biscuit

...

I don't deserve to be complimented.

If it weren't for Max escaping, I would have been clueless until the bitter end.

I should have clued in earlier.

Uuuugggh! At least I know now. Anyway, I need to hurry and find Max so I can talk to him.

*Sniff sniff*

*Sniff sniff sniff sniff*

You

What are you doing?

Biscuit

I'm using my nose to track Max's scent.

*Sniff sniff*

You

Biscuit moves slowly while tracking Max's scent.

A few minutes later.

Biscuit

I found him!!

Let's go, Trainer!

You

??

Biscuit

I think I know where Max is!

8. Max and Biscuit

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Biscuit

Trainer.

Can you go into the park by yourself?

If I go, Max might run away again.

*Scrumble* *Scrumble*

Biscuit

This is Max's favorite ball.

While you play fetch with him,

I'll come slowly from behind and grab him.

Your choice

Won't Max be suspicious of me?

What should I do if Max runs away again?

Biscuit

All you've got to do is grab his attention with this ball.

There's nothing Max likes more than playing fetch.

You

Okay.

After receiving the ball from Biscuit, I head inside the park.

... Liter?

Liter

Greenhorn?

You

Upon entering the park, I see Volt, Max, and Liter all playing together.

Liter

What are you doing here?

Your choice

I came to play fetch.

I'm looking for a dog.

Liter

... By yourself?

You

All right, I'll come clean. I'm looking for a dog.

Liter

Any dog in particular?

You

Just in case Max overhears us, I quietly whisper to Liter.

Yeah. I need to capture the dog that's playing with Volt.

He escaped from the shelter.

Liter

Oooh, gotcha.

I was taking Volt for a walk when we ran into this little guy. I thought it was strange that there was a dog hanging around in the park.

They seemed to get along so well though, that I just left them to their own devices.

How do you plan on catching him?

You

With this ball.

Liter

That one in your hand?

... *Whistle*

You

As soon as I whistle, Volt and Max stare at me. I hold up the ball high for them both to see.

How about a game of fetch, fellas?

I'll throw the ball, and whoever catches it first is the winner.

Volt

*Bark*

Max

... *Ruff ruff*

You

Volt and Max begin to wag their tails furiously, their gaze fixated on the ball in my hand.

Liter

Man, they're really into it. Then again, they are dogs...

You

Ready? Go get it!

*Whip*

You

The moment Volt and Max start to rush towards the ball,

Biscuit pops out of some nearby bushes and grabs onto Max.

*Grab*

Biscuit

Got you!

Liter

!!

What the... Biscuit? Why were you hiding in there?

Biscuit

Hey, Liter.

*Roll roll*

*Click*

You

Biscuit clips a leash onto the squirming Max.

Biscuit

Shhhh!

Max, relax.

I didn't catch you to drag you back to the shelter!

I came because I want to talk!

If you run away, how are we supposed to talk?

You

At the mention of this, Max begins to calm down.

*Rub* *Rub*

You

Biscuit scratches Max's belly to relax him further.

Biscuit

Feeling a little more levelheaded now?

Max

...

Biscuit

Then, how about you tell me?

I've only heard the story from others at this point.

Max

*Ruff ruff*

Biscuit

Yes, you were curious about the Ark. I knew that.

Max

*Ruff*

*Ruff ruff ruff*

Biscuit

So you felt confined having never left the shelter...

I'm sorry. I never realized that you guys would feel that way.

Max

... *Ruff ruff*

Biscuit

What?!

You don't want to go back to the shelter?

Max

*Ruff ruff ruff*

Biscuit

You won't go?

But...

...

You

Biscuit seems lost in thought for a moment.

Biscuit

I understand how you feel, Max.

How about we make a shelter that's more like the Ark?

Max

*Ruff?*

Biscuit

If we do that, will you come back?

Max

...

*Ruff ruff*

Biscuit

Okay then!

I'll make a shelter where you can run around freely, just like in the Ark.

You

Come again?

Biscuit

I said I'm gonna make a shelter that's just like the Ark.

You

??

Is that even possible?

Biscuit

I've got to try.

Since I can't set them free just yet, it's the least I can do.

Your choice

I can help with that.

I'll help.

Biscuit

That's okay, this is my responsibility.

Liter

I think I can gather what's going on here.

I'll help.

It'll take you ages if you go solo on this one.

As a fellow pet owner, I care about the happiness of those dogs just as much as you do.

Max

*Ruff ruff*

Volt

*bark bark bark*

Liter

Haha, I see you two are awfully excited.

Biscuit

Liter, Trainer... thank you.

9. Shelter Renovation: A

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Liter

Wow, this shelter is pretty impressive.

Biscuit

Yep, it's got everything that you need.

You

As Biscuit said, the inside of the shelter contains everything necessary to keep the dogs alive,

but not much more.

The windows are practically the size of postage stamps.

The fenced-off area for the dogs to run in is far too small.

Centi

Hey guys.

Liter

Thanks for coming, Centi.

Sorry to call you up here during your vacation.

Centi

No worries!

So this is the dog shelter?

It's nicer than I imagined. I can't think of any other place I'd rather spend my vacation.

Your choice

Aren't you going a bit overboard?

You're not serious, are you?

Centi

I'm joking, you big goof!

But I am looking forward to spending some time with these doggies.

Biscuit

They're what brightens my day.

You

...

Liter

All right, time to get down to brass tacks.

Centi, I need you to make this place resemble the Ark.

Centi

Huh?

Biscuit

I want to have a shelter where you can run freely, just like in the Ark.

Centi

Hmm... well, the interior is quite spacious, so I'm sure I can come up with something.

Liter

Just remember, no matter how nice the interior is,

dogs need to be able to run around outside.

*Swoosh*

Liter

Let's draw up some blueprints first.

That'll be a big help once we actually start construction.

Biscuit

Sounds good!

So, what I was thinking was...

You

And with that, we commence the renovation of the shelter.

10. Shelter Renovation: B

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A few hours later.

Liter

There's no way we'll finish this in a day.

I figured as much.

Biscuit

It already looks completely different!

Liter

You ain't seen nothing yet.

I'm only about halfway finished.

This is just the barebones framework.

Centi

Either way, I like what you've done so far.

It might not look exactly like the Ark when it's completed, but it'll be darn close.

It's all because you gave us such a detailed explanation, Biscuit.

Liter

That way we could draw up super precise blueprints that make construction a cinch.

You

Looking around, a brand new shelter is slowly taking shape.

The enclosed interior area is altered to make it more spacious.

Floor-length windows and doggie doors have been installed to make everything feel more open.

Liter

I'll be a bit busy for the next few days, so it'll be a while before I can come and finish this.

In the meantime, don't let anyone in here, human or animal.

You

Got it.

Liter

I've got to get ready for a business trip.

Centi

And I'm gonna go on vacation for real this time.

Biscuit

Thank you both for all the help!

Liter

See you in a few days.

You

See you.

Liter and Centi leave.

Biscuit

I can't wait to show this to Max and the other dogs!

Do you think Max will want to come back once everything's finished?

You

Yes. I'm sure of it.

Biscuit

We should head over to Nero's, since the dogs are over there.

... *Tadak*

???

... *Arf*

You

??

???

... *Pant pant*

Biscuit

??

Trainer...

am I hallucinating, or are all the dogs running towards us?

Your choice

I see it too.

Seems that only you could see it.

Biscuit

Then are the other dogs... ghosts?! Eek!

*Rub rub*

Biscuit

No, wait... those are the rest of the dogs from the shelter!

... *Doodada*

Off in the distance, dozens of dogs are hurtling towards the shelter.

Biscuit

No, they can't come into the shelter yet!

Trainer, we've got to stop them!

You

Okay!

*Swish*

*Swish* *Swish*

You

Every time I try to catch one of the dogs, they quickly escape my grasp.

*Beep*

Biscuit

Stop!

Max

...

Puppies

...

*Doodadadadada*

You

Max and the other dogs take a quick glimpse and Biscuit and I, then make a beeline for the new and improved shelter.

Biscuit

W-wait guys, the shelter isn't ready yet! You can't go in right n...

*Crash* *Rattle*

You

Before Biscuit has even finished her sentence, the stampeding herd of canines crashes into a wall that is still under construction.

Biscuit

Eep! Are you okay?

Puppies

*Yelp*

Biscuit

I told you to be careful!

...!

Several of the dogs' ears perk up.

*Swish* *Swish*

Biscuit's ears perk up as well, as she suddenly swerves around to face me.

Biscuit

We've gotta get out of here!

You

??

Biscuit

Take cover!

The shelter is collapsing!

You

I don't feel any...

*Crack*

*Craaaaack*

*Raaaaatle*

*Crash*

You

...

Max

...

Puppies

...

You

The shelter, which we had devoted so much time and effort into, collapses.

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You

I suppose I should notify Liter.

Puppies

*Whine*

Biscuit

No treats for you for a week!

You

Biscuit is giving the dogs, who all seem highly distressed, a serious dressing down.

Your choice

They didn't know any better.

These furballs destroy everything they touch.

Biscuit

Maybe so, but...

I don't know if I'd go that far...

You

It'll be a while before Liter gets here. What should we do in the meantime?

Biscuit

What else can we do?

We wait.

*Sigh* What a bunch of rascals you all are!

Max, I thought you didn't want to come back to the shelter?

Do you realize how much danger you all were in just now?

You were very nearly flattened into a bunch of puppy pancakes!

Max

...

Puppies

...

Your choice

No one got hurt though, so shouldn't you take it easy on them?

I think they know they were wrong.

Biscuit

Maybe you're right. I'm glad no one got hurt, but...

From their expressions, I'd say you're right.

Max

...

Puppies

...

Biscuit

Even so, no treats.

A few hours later.

*Crumble* *Crumble*

You

What are you doing?

Biscuit

Preparing for training.

Just because the shelter collapsed doesn't mean training is canceled.

All right, let's go everyone!

*Beep*

Biscuit

Gather in front of me, it's time for training.

Today we're going to talk about correcting bad behavior.

Max

...

Puppies

...

You

All of the dogs lie slumped down in front of the shelter.

They don't exactly seem full of verve.

Biscuit

Hmm...

It might be because of how I scolded them back there. That was the first time I've ever had to do that.

Your choice

Why don't we take a day off?

Why don't we give them some treats?

Biscuit

It's not good to skip training.

You

They might come back feeling refreshed after a bit of rest.

Biscuit

...

What?

You

Treats cure everything.

Biscuit

I really didn't want to give them treats today, but...

Would you guys like some treats?

Max

...

Puppies

...

Biscuit

Oh my goodness... they didn't even react to the promise of treats.

You

How about we take a break today?

Biscuit

Yeah, let's do that.

These little guys might be a little shaken up.

You

Good idea.

Next day.

Biscuit

All right guys, chowtime!

*Pour*

Max

...

Puppies

...

You

The dogs sit back and stare at the food Biscuit had put in the bowls.

Biscuit

Huh?

Are you not hungry?

Then... how about we play with some toys first, and then eat?

Getting you up and active might help you work up an appetite.

Do you wanna play tug of war?

Or frisbee, maybe?

Max

...

Puppies

...

You

The dogs continue to stare at Biscuit without moving an inch.

Biscuit

What's wrong?

Are you guys hurt?

Your choice

I think they're a bit apprehensive.

Maybe they feel bad about what they did yesterday.

Biscuit

Apprehensive? But why?

You

Maybe they feel bad about yesterday.

As soon as I mention this, their tails begin to wag.

Biscuit

Looks like you might be onto something.

It's okay everyone. Eat up!

Max

...

Puppies

...

Biscuit

It's okay, honestly!

Look, can't you see me smiling? Hehe!

You

The sight of Biscuit's smile fails to move the dogs.

Biscuit

Oh boy... what should I do?

You

Hmm...

...

If they feel sorry for what they did yesterday, perhaps we can try repairing the shelter together.

Max

??

Puppies

???

You

Let's do what we can before Liter comes.

I'll pitch in.

Max

... *Ruff*

Puppies

*Arf arf*

You

The dogs wag their tails with gusto.

Biscuit

You mean...

Max

*Ruff ruff*

Puppies

*Arf arf arf*

Biscuit

You guys want to do it together?

Max

*Ruff ruff*

Biscuit

I know it was your fault, but it's still too dangerous.

Max

*Ruff ruff ruff ruff*

Biscuit

I know, but...

... Are you sure we can do it?

Your choice

Trust me.

I'm practically an honorary member of Mighty Tools.

Biscuit

Okay, if you say so.

Let's give it a shot.

Here are the blueprints that Liter and Centi drafted.

*Beep*

Biscuit

Okay, all of you, line up!

*Step* *Step* *Step*

You

They're certainly listening to you now.

Biscuit

We're going to renovate the shelter on our own.

Trainer and I will work on the foundation while you all bring us the materials.

It's just like fetch.

Can you guys do it?

Max

*Ruff ruff*

Puppies

*Arf arf arf*

You

We begin to renovate the shelter... again.

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*Craash*

*Crush! Crush*

Biscuit

Max! Hammer!

Max

*Ruff ruff*

Biscuit

You had it ready? Thanks!

*Bangbang*

You

I need a wrench.

*Thud*

Puppies

*Arf*

You

Thanks.

Biscuit, the dogs and I begin to renovate the shelter together.

*Squeak* *Squeak*

You

Screwdriver.

Max

*Ruff*

Biscuit

We need some wood.

Puppies

*Arf arf*

You

Drill.

Max

*Ruff ruff ruff*

*Brrrrrr*

Your choice

We work together better than I thought we would.

We really do make a great team.

Biscuit

Hehe. Right?

A few hours later.

Max

*Ruff ruff*

Biscuit

Huh? You want me to install some blinds here?

Max

*Ruff ruff ruff*

Biscuit

Ah, I see. Gotcha.

Trainer!

Can you install some window blinds on the left?

You

Why? Don't dogs like sunlight?

Biscuit

Yes, but Lily only sleeps wherever there isn't any sunlight.

This area is where Lily will be spending the most time.

Once you're done with the ones on the left, we'll need one on the right as well.

Booboo and Koko are both scared of windows.

You

Sure thing.

Max

*Ruff ruff ruff*

Biscuit

Yes, I know about Teddy and his bad joints.

That's why I prepared a mat here that he can lie on.

Can't forget Rocky's dolls either. He can't sleep without them.

I know how fond Joy is of chewing wires, so I'll install them on the ceiling.

And for Buddy, I'll put the pee pad on the wall since he likes marking his territory.

You

Biscuit takes the personality traits of every single dog into consideration as we progress with the renovations.

You've memorized all of that?

Biscuit

I don't think of it as memorization. It's just something that I should know.

This is basic information.

Puppies

*Arf arf arf*

Biscuit

See, you guys know what I'm talking about.

We're family! Hee hee!

A few moments later.

*Snap*

*Bangbang*

Max

*Ruff ruff*

Biscuit

We should tailor this to fit Max.

Max

*Ruff ruff ruff*

Biscuit

Just about... this big should do it.

You

Biscuit is squatting near a door, tinkering with something.

What are you doing?

Biscuit

I'm fixing one of the doggie doors that broke.

Finished! Now let's go outside.

*Whoosh*

You

Biscuit and the dogs all head out to the yard.

Biscuit

Guys!

Can you dig here so that I can plant some grass?

Puppies

*Arf*

Max

*Ruff ruff ruff*

You

All the dogs start digging in unison.

*Dig dig*

*Dig dig dig*

Biscuit

Don't dig too deep! Good... good... perfect!

*Plant! *Plant*

*Plant! *Plant* *Plant*

You

Why are you planting grass?

Biscuit

Since the dogs are going to be playing outside, I don't want them to hurt their paws.

It may be artificial grass, but it's better than nothing.

The ideal solution would be for them to wear booties, but some of them really hate those.

After we're done here, I'll install a tent too.

You

I can help with that.

Biscuit

Sounds like a plan!

Puppies

*Arf arf*

Max

*Ruff ruff ruff*

Biscuit

Sure, you guys can pitch in as well.

You

All through the evening, we keep at it.

The lights of the shelter stay on until the morning.

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Next day.

Biscuit

Check this out, Trainer!

Tah-dah! It's a sign for our new shelter.

You

A sign?

Biscuit

Yeah! Now that we have a newly constructed shelter, we should give it a name.

Puppies

*Arf arf*

Biscuit

I wonder what we should name it?

I wonder...

You

We built it together with the dogs, so...

Bow Wow Paradise?

Biscuit

That's pretty good! Like a paradise for dogs.

A place where the dogs can spend their days happy and carefree.

You

That's a wonderful interpretation.

Biscuit

In that case, I'll put up the sign.

*Stick*

Biscuit

Now we're finally finished.

Max

*Ruff ruff*

Puppies

*Arf arf arf*

You

It may not be as fancy as what Liter and Centi would have produced,

but it has a little more character now, and it shows off the dogs' personalities.

Biscuit

What do you think, Trainer?

The dogs and I are quite satisfied!

Your choice

I like it as well.

I think it's great.

Biscuit

Hehe. Me too!

Not too bad.

You

We can have Liter put on the finishing touches later.

Biscuit

Sure thing.

Well guys, take a look at the shelter we made together!

Max

*Ruff ruff*

Puppies

*Arf arf arf*

Your choice

*Woof woof*

*Bow wow*

Puppies

...

Max

...

You

... Sorry.

Biscuit

Max and the dogs are really proud of their work, and they say they like it too.

*Growl*

*Groooowl*

Biscuit

Huh? Are you all hungry?

Puppies

*Arf arf*

Max

*Ruff ruff ruff*

Biscuit

Let's eat then!

How about you, Trainer? Are you going to eat too?

Your choice

As long as it's not dog food.

Sure.

Biscuit

Don't worry, I've got some kibble that humans can eat as well.

At least, it tasted pretty good when I had some.

I'll bring you a bowl.

You

Breakfast may end up being more grueling than all that physical labor.

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A few days later.

Liter

All finished!

I fortified the foundation and made some improvements to the exterior.

The interior was done perfectly, so I didn't have to do anything there.

You

Thank you.

Biscuit

Thank you, Liter.

You

A few days later, Liter came and put a few finishing touches on Bow Wow Paradise.

The shelter was now well and truly complete.

Max

*Ahwoooooo*

Puppies

*Arf arf*

Liter

Haha, you guys happy? Now it won't break if any of you accidently crash into it.

Max

*Sniff sniff*

Puppies

*Sniff sniff sniff*

*Tadadak*

You

Max and the dogs run past Biscuit and into the shelter.

They scamper around excitedly, leaving pawprints everywhere.

Liter

They're beside themselves with excitement.

You

They seem happy.

Max

*Ruff ruff*

You

Max runs up to Biscuit and licks her face.

Biscuit

Ahhhh! Max!

*Craaaash*

*Lick*

Max

*Ruff ruff*

Biscuit

Max, that tickles! You like it? Really? Even better than the Ark?

Your choice

I'm not so sure I believe that...

I think that might be a white lie on his part.

Max

*Grrrrrrr*

You

... Sorry.

Biscuit

What do you say we head outside?

Max

*Ruff ruff*

Biscuit

Let's go for our inaugural run around Bow Wow Paradise.

Why don't you join us, Trainer?

You

Don't mind if I do.

Liter

You can join them too, Volt.

Volt

*Ahwoooooo*

You

Biscuit and the dogs frolic amongst the large field.

Finally, there's a place where these dogs can be happy.

That place is called Bow Wow Paradise.

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You

I'm Max.

The leader of Bow Wow Paradise, and a dog with dignity.

Joy

*Boof boof* (Max! Teddy says his leg hurts.)

Max

*Bow Wow* (All right, I'll have his mat swapped out for a thicker one.)

Booboo

*Woof woof woof* (Max, Buddy peed on the floor.)

Max

*Ruff ruff* (Let's get some paper towels and wipe it off.)

Rocky

*Woo woo woo*(Max! Lily is bothering me!)

Lily

*Grrrrrrr* (You ate my snack first!)

Bobby

*Whine* (Max, I'm hungry.)

Buddy

*Bow wow wow* (Max! I need to poop!)

Max

...

You

I've got to tell Biscuit about all these issues.

*Ta-da-dak*

You

I climb onto the platform situated in the middle of the yard.

This place provides the best vantage point in all of Bow Wow Paradise.

Biscuit made it especially for me.

Koko

*Bark bark* (Catch me!)

Booboo

*Woof woof?* (Why should I?)

Buddy

*Bow! Grrrr*

You

...

Such a peaceful day today.

Biscuit

Max!

Where are you? It's time to eat.

Max

*Ruff ruff*

Biscuit

There you are.

What have you been up to?

I brought some beef-flavored kibble, your favorite.

Max

*Ruff ruff ruff*

You

Biscuit always knows what I like.

If she wants a bite or two, I'll let her.

*Pour*

Biscuit

Go ahead and eat up so you can play with the others.

Max

*Ruff ruff ruff*

Biscuit

Yes, we played Booboo's favorite game, Tug of War, yesterday,

so today we'll toss a ball. I know that's what you and Lily prefer.

Ah, right. On the way back from Royal Road today, I saw a dog that was wearing a ribbon.

It was positively adorable! I think you'd be cute with a ribbon too.

You

Please, I'm far too dignified for such garish accessories.

*Chomp* *Chomp* *Chomp* *Crunch*

Biscuit

*Drool* Is it good?

Max

*Ruff?*

Biscuit

Oh, no, I'm okay.

Max

*Ruff ruff*

Biscuit

... Okay, just a little bite. Hee hee.

*Chomp chomp*

You

If that's what you call a "little" bite...

...

Back in the day, I dreamt of the outside.

Looking back, I realize now how ignorant I was then.

Biscuit

*Munch munch* Aren't you eating, Max?

Max

*Ruff ruff*

Biscuit

You're full already? Well, in that case... I'll finish the rest!

Omnomnomnom!

You

However.

Things are different now.

I like it here better than the Ark.

I'll do whatever it takes to protect Biscuit and the other dogs.

Because this is a place

that we made with our own hands.

This is our paradise.

Our home.

Bow Wow Paradise.